Innocence – A short story

Malaika was a little girl, aged five. She lived with her parents and little sister, Sarika, in a beautiful cottage on Fern Hill.  Sarika had just turned three. Malaika was in kindergarten in a school nearby.

Malaika loved Sarika to bits, and Sarika, for her part, followed her sister around and idolized her. Except for school time, the two were inseparable.

Malaika loved her school, her teacher – Ms.Beal, her lessons and her classmates. However, the highlight of every school day was the mid-morning snack break.

Just before the bell rang for snack time, the delicious smell of butter biscuits would waft through the classroom. Malaika’s tongue watered as the food cart was wheeled into the classroom.

Each child was given a nice warm glass of milk and two butter biscuits with it.  Malaika loved the biscuits and the milk.

The best part was yet to come. A few butter biscuits were always left over in the packet, so at the end of the morning, just before school dispersed, Ms.Beal asked questions. The first student to answer each question correctly, was rewarded with a biscuit.

Most days, Malaika managed to answer at least two questions before her classmates did, and took the butter biscuits home to share with her sister, Sarika.

But today, her luck had deserted her. She was not the first to answer even a single question. Tears ran down her sweet face, as she imagined the disappointment on Sarika’s face. What could she tell her? A cloud of worry descended on her face.

The teacher noticed that something was wrong. She asked Malaika to wait. All her classmates left the classroom.

“What’s wrong my dear?”asked the teacher.

Malaika told her that she was very sad that her sister would be disappointed about the butter biscuits.

The teacher smiled and said, “Guess what, I have a couple on my table, you can take those for your sister, ok?”

Malaika said, “Ms.Beal, could you ask me two questions. Please give me the biscuits after I answer them.”

Malaika answered both and took home – two semi-powdered biscuits that were filled with love and happiness, to her little sister.

When Sarika saw her elder sister, she shouted, “Butter biki, butter biki, give me.”

Malaika said, “Wait…I have brought them. I never forget, you know that.”

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29 Responses to Innocence – A short story

  1. Sisterly love is so sweet! Always enjoy your stories Nimi!

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  2. Aadhirai says:

    Lovely!! Only sisters could be so.. πŸ™‚

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  3. Belinda Crane says:

    Beautiful Nimi. I loved Malaika personal integrity requesting that the teacher asked her two questions. Just lovely. πŸ™‚

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  4. andeepak says:

    That’s so nice, talking of integrity reminded me something a couple of weeks back I purchased a few coconuts from road side tender coconut vendor as usual I asked him how much he told some price I just paid and took the coconuts, couple of days later while I was walking he called me and he told me that he had charged me more and asked me to give 2 rupees and gave one coconut, I was surprised I almost said thats ok keep the money but would have belittled him I actually gave him the 2 rupees and got the extra coconut. I was amazed to see this from a person who barely makes his ends meet.

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  5. Belinda Crane says:

    Reblogged this on Belinda Crane and commented:
    There are quite a few stories that I have read here on WordPress that I think about from time to time. This is one of them. It is the most beautiful story written by a lady that writes so delicately from her heart. Her short stories are beautiful and her posts ignite the most precious memories in you. If you haven’t met Nimi yet go and experience her website. 😊

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  6. ceayr says:

    I was directed here from Belinda Crane’s site, and it is a pleasure to visit you.

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  7. Awww…, this is such a sweet story… i loved it more for the strength of character Malaika shows, asking Ms Beal for the two questions to be put to her. She wants to earn her reward..!

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    • nimi naren says:

      Thank you very much for taking the time to read this. I am glad you liked it. Yes, Malaika’s wanting to earn it and not take the easy way out is what I really wanted to focus on in the story. Thank you once again.


  8. keithakenel says:

    What?! No twist?
    I follow a Brit who writes under “eyewillnotcry” and the vast majority of his poems end with terrible things happening.
    Sometimes simple is sweet, huh?

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  9. noelleg44 says:

    What a lovely story about the love between two siblings! I really enjoyed it

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  10. Nimi, this is such a beautiful story πŸ™‚

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